I really liked the beginning. I thought the music really matched the antisipation of finding a job. Really fits well together. Also quite a clear idea, simple and effective
Good use of stills, works well and tells the story well. Personally whilst the music particularly works well towards the start as it builds the narrative, I think a change in music would of given it a bit more emotion.
Suitable music for narrative, simple story line is effective with small number of stills. Like the composition of initial shots.
I like it. It's clear. The music is good, but as mr pulver says maybe a shift in music to create a bit more anticipation.
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I really liked the beginning. I thought the music really matched the antisipation of finding a job. Really fits well together. Also quite a clear idea, simple and effective
Good use of stills, works well and tells the story well. Personally whilst the music particularly works well towards the start as it builds the narrative, I think a change in music would of given it a bit more emotion.
Suitable music for narrative, simple story line is effective with small number of stills. Like the composition of initial shots.
I like it. It's clear. The music is good, but as mr pulver says maybe a shift in music to create a bit more anticipation.
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